All in the Eyes
Ode to man with gorgeous eyes on train:
Oh man with beautiful eyes
I see you and try not to stare
You see me and pretend not to notice me trying not to stare
The train moves
You are tall
But not too tall
I question your choice of jacket
You glance at me again
I catch your eye
The attempt not to stare begins anew
They are so green
Well, maybe a bit blue
It is hard to tell in the fluorescent lighting
Damn the fluorescent bulbs
Damn the fluorescent bulbs
The train rocks
I accidentally elbow you
There is a moment
"Excuse me"
"It's OK"
You smile
Oh those eyes
Politely we avert our attentions
The train stops
You leave
Damn Bergen street
Damn Bergen street
I sigh
I will remember our times
Oh the poor choice of jacket!
Oh the slight elbow jab!
What fun we had
I will remember fondly
Our brief time together
Oh you man of beautiful eyes
You man of beautiful eyes...
Oh man with beautiful eyes
I see you and try not to stare
You see me and pretend not to notice me trying not to stare
The train moves
You are tall
But not too tall
I question your choice of jacket
You glance at me again
I catch your eye
The attempt not to stare begins anew
They are so green
Well, maybe a bit blue
It is hard to tell in the fluorescent lighting
Damn the fluorescent bulbs
Damn the fluorescent bulbs
The train rocks
I accidentally elbow you
There is a moment
"Excuse me"
"It's OK"
You smile
Oh those eyes
Politely we avert our attentions
The train stops
You leave
Damn Bergen street
Damn Bergen street
I sigh
I will remember our times
Oh the poor choice of jacket!
Oh the slight elbow jab!
What fun we had
I will remember fondly
Our brief time together
Oh you man of beautiful eyes
You man of beautiful eyes...
posted by ldbug at Wednesday, February 07, 2007
16 Comments:
So, did he have beautiful eyes? ;)
Just kidding, I liked this one.
Steve~
Tell us about the poor choice of jacket...
steve - they were lovely! :-)
cindy - had some fur on the hood, not girly, and I've seen (straight) guys with jackets like it here in NY, but just not a very manly jacket...
i love it when those things happen
So, it wasn't a "Members Only" jacket then...taht's good!
I liked this little ditty! Very nice!
dilling - I just wish we could have had one more stop together;-)
rock - naw, I just didn't like the style that much..kinda the "expensive look"
I loved this. I love moments like this. I wish there were more of them, and I wish they led somewhere! :-)
this is good and who knows it might lead somewhere! we will be waiting and watching for more of the man with the beautiful eyes!
Those jackets with the fur hoods! Only young guys, gay or straight can get away with wearing them. If you are a guy over 30 then step away from the fur hooded jacket!
I liked your poem!
cleavers - oh I wish they would lead somewhere too!
indoors - sadly, I doubt we'll be on the same train again:-(
tod - he looked about my age, which I guess is in the OK to wear bracket,still too fashionable for my tastes;-)
k, now...i have changed my links again...are you staying?
Thats one of the most roamntic posts i have read in quite a while!
great!
N
dilling - Oh, so sorry! Yeah I'm here for good:-)
nothingman - It was the flourescent bulbs part that did it for you, wasn't it;-)
Pretty eyes are always worth swooning over...and dude definitely needs to upgrade to a manlier jacket :-)
So why didn't you ask him out then? I'd bet a lot of money he would have said yes.
Speaking as a Canandian who has a parka with a fur colar, plus various lamb skin jackets, there is nothing unmanly about a bit of fur. Nothing.
I dare yas to tell me different...
molly - see boy..
boy - dude, from Montana! Practically Canadian right there we don't have fur lining, all fleese. Anyway, he's in New York, the fur is for looks not warmth..I mean it's cold, but a tiny little bit of fur on the hood isn't going to mean the difference between frost-bite and luxurious warmth;-)
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